Good afternoon folks,

We are currently working on our writing skills. Read the topic below and write one to two paragraphs in response to this topic.

Working on my language

Hala

Task 1:

Here are some guiding ideas to help you construct your paragraph:

• Why I joined the class
• My needs were
• I learnt
• I want to still work on

Han

Working on my language

As a new comer in Canada, catching English fluently and frequently is the first and important step for me to assimilate into the new community. I thought the convenience and direct way was to join the LINC class, so I have studied in MircoSkill School from half a year ago.

 After this period, I feel my English skills improved obviously and getting a lot of knowledge learned. First of all, I have learned many new vocabularies, grammas, and tense. Then, I have learned how to use them naturally. And finally, I also have learned many historical and geographical knowledge of Canada. To conclude, the first step is partly accomplished but still having a long-term hard way for me. I’ll carry on working on my language.

Lucy’s Edit

As a new comer in Canada, catching English fluently and frequently is the first and important step for me to assimilate into the new community. I thought the convenience and direct way was to join the LINC class, so I have been studying studied in MircoSkill School from half a year ago.

 After this period, I feel my English skills improved obviously and getting a lot of knowledge learned. First of all, I have learned many new vocabularies, grammas, and tense. Then, I have learned how to use them naturally. And finally, I also have learned many historical and geographical knowledge of Canada. To conclude, the first step is partly accomplished but still having a long-term hard way for me. I’ll carry on working on my language.