Good afternoon folks,

We are currently working on our writing skills. Read the topic below and write one to two paragraphs in response to this topic.

Working on my language

Hala

Task 1:

Here are some guiding ideas to help you construct your paragraph:

• Why I joined the class
• My needs were
• I learnt
• I want to still work on

Han

Working on my language

As a new comer in Canada, catching English fluently and frequently is the first and important step for me to assimilate into the new community. I thought the convenience and direct way was to join the LINC class, so I have studied in MircoSkill School from half a year ago.

 After this period, I feel my English skills improved obviously and getting a lot of knowledge learned. First of all, I have learned many new vocabularies, grammas, and tense. Then, I have learned how to use them naturally. And finally, I also have learned many historical and geographical knowledge of Canada. To conclude, the first step is partly accomplished but still having a long-term hard way for me. I’ll carry on working on my language.

Lucy’s Edit

As a new comer in Canada, catching English fluently and frequently is the first and important step for me to assimilate into the new community. I thought the convenience and direct way was to join the LINC class, so I have been studying studied in MircoSkill School from half a year ago.

 After this period, I feel my English skills improved obviously and getting a lot of knowledge learned. First of all, I have learned many new vocabularies, grammas, and tense. Then, I have learned how to use them naturally. And finally, I also have learned many historical and geographical knowledge of Canada. To conclude, the first step is partly accomplished but still having a long-term hard way for me. I’ll carry on working on my language.

Make a story from a picture

Task 1:

Look at this picture below and describe the person in it. You need to describe the surroundings, what she is thinking of, what you think is her emotional state, and what might have been going in her life. Use at least 10 different adjectives/adverbs and make sure to write all in third person speaker (he/she/it).

This is a sunny but hopeless autumn’s afternoon.  There is a beautiful dolorous lady sitting and leaning against a huge column. The column belongs to an abandoned building situated on the top of a mountain that located among a big valley. There is a magnificent sunset and grand landscape in front of her, but the young lady’s sight is only staring at the current place. 

She is in trouble and feeling deeply faithful. First of all, she lost her lovely job several weeks ago because of her company’s terrible economical situation. Then, she found her husband’s proved affair and were thinking about the divorce with him. And finally, just few days ago, she was diagnosed a horrible chronic disease: diabetes. Clearly, everything seems painful, she deeply feels hopeless and doubts what’s  the proper way she can carry on.